Thursday, 10 March 2016

My Important Event

Hello friends….welcome back to my blog. I would like to share with you my important event. My important event was when I arrived in Bali. Who does not know the name of Bali. Bali is a beautiful and amazing tourism. This is my first time to go to Bali. I went there with my friend. My friend invited me while we were on holiday. I had never been to Bali before that. If I want to be honest I really have always wanted to go there. I never  thought  if I had the opportunity to spend my holidays there. I was very happy when we had arrived there. We were there to stay in a house of my friend’s sister. We visited Kuta beach. We walked around the beach and found a lot of strangers. We met a lot of tourist from different countries and we asked them about their culture. We spent our time at the beach to talk with the tourists. We also got knowledge about the culture of Bali. We got a lot of new experiences and found interesting things in Bali. We hope that we can go to Bali again and get a job there. I think that's all ^_^
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4 comments:

  1. Bali ? Wow! I love Bali as well. I go there every year on the christmas holiday. Maybe we could meet up sometime when you went there too. It is a good topic, but I think that you have to work more on the tenses. You made few mistakes there in using the past and present tense. You also need to work more on the grammar. It is better to say that you “met ” a lot of strangers instead of “found”. Good luck! ;)

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  2. Hello Stephen Richardo, it was interesting experience you could go to somewhere with your friend when the holiday came.
    The chronology of your story was orderly well. However, please pay attention on the grammar. I found a grammaticaly error on your blog. If the event happened in the past, you should use past tense. After all, your writing is good, I just find a mistake.
    Please visit my blog and give a comment on it.
    I am waiting for your visit.

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  3. Bali. I would love to go to kuta beach. If you go to bali again you can invite me. We went with seeing beautiful bali brother.

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  4. Wow! Bali ! That is the most beautiful island in Indonesia. It is a good experience Richard. You can share anything with me, especially about adventure. I am very interested about that. About this writing text, you can learn more about vocabulary.

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